Kirkus Discoveries is about to post the following review of The First Excellence! ...compelling storylines...
When Fa-ling was a child in Guangxi, China, her birth mother—fearful that her ruthless mother-in-law would kill Fa-ling and her newborn sister—abandoned the girls on a park bench before committing suicide. Fa-ling and her sister Daphne lived at a wretched orphanage where Fa-ling tolerated sexual abuse in an unspoken trade for extra food for her and Daphne. Readers later discover that their father’s heart was broken by their disappearance, and though he was too weak to stand up to his insufferable mother, he continued to search for them unbeknownst to Fa-ling and Daphne.
Forward to the present, when 21-year-old Fa-ling is living with her loving adoptive family in Canada, but feeling lost, tentative and confused about her future. Determined to resolve her feelings by revisiting her past, she returns to China. For safety reasons, she doesn’t go alone, but travels with a tour guide and a group of five couples who ironically are going to China to adopt a child. Soon after their arrival, a gruesome murder occurs at their
hotel and Fa-ling unknowingly stumbles into a three-way plot involving child kidnapping, organ theft, political intrigue and government coverups.
Enter detectives Wang and Cheng, two wonderfully rendered characters who must toe the tenuous line between uncovering the truth and risking reprisal from governmental higher-ups. The other compelling storylines quickly unfold, and Carrick deftly and seamlessly weaves these plots together. As with many other mysteries, there’s a lengthy list of characters and some readers may feel confused by the array. Though there are some lovely descriptions, there are also some jarring metaphors and similes which disrupt the narrative flow—“Her voice, never soothing at the best of times, ripped through the humid afternoon with the intensity of a chicken being plucked” and “The water shimmered, whispering like a friend in a new dress.”
Still, the conclusion is pleasantly unpredictable.
ENJOYABLY COMPLICATED PLOTS WITH SOME WELL-DEPICTED CHARACTERS.
Carrick, Donna
THE FIRST EXCELLENCE:
Fa-ling’s Map
BookSurge (374 pp.)
$17.99 paperback
September 26, 2009
ISBN: 978-1-4392-5393-9
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Comments (8)
That's an awesome review! Congratulations :) "wonderfully rendered characters" - Woohoo!
Posted by Jemi Fraser | November 27, 2009 9:23 PM
Posted on November 27, 2009 21:23
Thanks, Jemi. I was pretty pleased with it.
Best regards, Donna
Posted by Donna Carrick | November 28, 2009 10:59 AM
Posted on November 28, 2009 10:59
The plot, in a nutshell, seems very intriguing. This review certainly has me awaiting eagerly for my copy of The First Excellence. That's a great start! Congratulations.
Posted by Kalpa | November 29, 2009 7:27 AM
Posted on November 29, 2009 07:27
Thanks, Kalpa, and thanks for dropping in! Hope you enjoy it. Donna
Posted by Donna Carrick | November 29, 2009 10:14 PM
Posted on November 29, 2009 22:14
Donna, what a wonderful review. Thanks for sharing with us. I can't wait to read it!
Posted by Cat Woods | December 3, 2009 1:37 PM
Posted on December 3, 2009 13:37
Thanks, Cat. I just saw it was posted on the Amazon site as well -- Yay!
Posted by Donna Carrick | December 3, 2009 2:18 PM
Posted on December 3, 2009 14:18
This is an amazing review, Donna. Congratulations!
I now know Christmas pressie for my sister!
Posted by Marisa Birns | December 4, 2009 2:18 PM
Posted on December 4, 2009 14:18
Thank you, Marisa! Best news I've had all day. Donna
Posted by Donna Carrick | December 4, 2009 2:21 PM
Posted on December 4, 2009 14:21